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 Idea for story: -The Roadchel Chronicles-

Joined: Mon Mar 02, 2015 1:04 am
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Mon Mar 02, 2015 2:15 am

(Note- The beginning a bit cliche but the rest is okay, I guess.)

I stumble through the village, trying to get my way to the market. Wow, I think, the test to be a knight is hard work.

Then I trip over a wheelbarrow, and fly into the wall of a dark alley.

Two dark eyes stare into mine.

"Who are you?" 

The pair of eyes is a face. Than a neck. A body. A boy, dressed in sackcloth.

My mind twists and twirls. "I am.. I am Ellinere Onelltike, a knight of the Silver Honor." I say.

Another boy, this one older-looking, comes into my line of sight.




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