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 In memory part 5
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Joined: Mon Oct 04, 2010 12:56 pm
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Mon Nov 01, 2010 2:50 pm
( The scene begins in art class. The girls are working on a huge sclupture)
 
Catlyn: That guy likes you.
 
Scar: I sounded like an idoit. Suprise physical? And what about you, miss we don't have time to talk to him? What was wrong with you?
 
Catlyn: You know what happened the last time you made friends with a new kid.
 
(cuts to a scene of scar at a wild party,  then passed out in a bathtub with shrapie all over her face.. A blonde woman, completly naked, walks in and sees scar, and then screams)
 
Scar: That was one time, and his mother had a good laugh about that.
 
Catlyn: I don't want you to get hurt again.
 
Scar: Catlyn, (teases) are you jealous?
 (a boy with tinfoil antlers on his head walks past them)
 
Catlyn: Jealous? Scar, that's not my point and-
 
(the boy with the antlers moos at them and then sits down in catlyn's lap)
 
Julius: Hey, baby. What's shakin?' (in a cool, suave voice.)
 
Catlyn: (frowns and gags) Get off me, petermen. (shoves julius onto the floor.)
 
Scar: Juilus, don't you have a flying saucer to get back on?
 
Julius: Not until my lady of love agrees to go with me. (tries to kiss catlyn)
 
Catlyn: EW! Gross! Get away from me! (walks away, pretending to cry.)
 
Scar: He's a real jimmy.
 
Catlyn: He has your real little brother. Bet my entire horror movie collection they were switched at birth.
 
Scar: I'd have to agree with you.
 
(Scene ends and cuts to one in a hallway. Dlyan meets scar at her locker.)
 
Scar (Nervously, and way too loud.) HI! (softly) Hi, you,, uh.. scared me a little.
 
Dlyan: Hey, I was wondering if you had any plans after school. My mom's unpacking and she's trying to keep me out of the hosue as much as-
 
Scar: (too quickly) I have a doctor's appointment. But.. uh..
 
Dlyan: Where? My mom got a job as a nurse here.
 
Scar: Dr benson's?
 
dylan: yeah!( way too excited)  Um.. I could meet you there afterward.
 
Scar: Uh,, sure why not?
 
Voiceover: What are you thinking?!
 
Other voiceover: Oh, cmon! You were just going to go home, and watch spongebob. Shut up and have fun.

Voiceover: When he finds out, I'm sick, then what? He's going to find out!
 
Other voice over:If he really lieks you he won't care!
 
Voiceover: is that why I only have one friend now?



 Re: In memory part 5
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Joined: Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:47 am
Posts: 7216
Mon Nov 01, 2010 11:07 pm
The voice overs are beginning to get a little bit confusing, but overall this is still going great!


~Cavy

KIRA AND TWINKS!!!!! WIA WRITERS OF THE YEAR!!!!!!!




 Re: In memory part 5
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Joined: Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:20 pm
Posts: 5477
Mon Jan 03, 2011 9:13 pm


_cavyheart_ wrote:
The voice overs are beginning to get a little bit confusing, but overall this is still going great!


~Cavy

KIRA AND TWINKS!!!!! WIA WRITERS OF THE YEAR!!!!!!!



I think it's supposed to be like the little angel and devil on your shoulder.



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