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 interview with an actual boy!!!!!!
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Joined: Thu Apr 22, 2010 8:45 pm
Posts: 181
Sat May 01, 2010 11:24 pm
hailey: (hillbilly acsent) Today we will have an actual boy come!
 
boy: Hello girls, nice to be here.
h: (screams) An actual boy! I've never seen one before!
b: (confused) oooooookkkkkkkkk?!?!?!?!
h: So tell me Mr.Boy, have you ever seen a girl before?
b: um, yes i believe so.
h: oh, we don't have dem er boys where i come from.
b: ok and where are you from?
h: shhhhhh! its a secret! i'm from (looks to make sure there isn't anybody around then gets by his ear.)   MISSOURI!!!!! did you hear that I said MISSOURI!
b: (run)
h: was is somethin I said?
 
  I hope you like it. i can only be really funny when i'm not tryin to be. words will just come out of my mouth and ppl start crackin up laughin. i dont really think this is funny but all well! oh just want to make a shout out to laughingbird. laughingbird, I LOVE your randomness! i'm random too! we need to be friends!



 Re: interview with an actual boy!!!!!!
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Joined: Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:38 pm
Posts: 515
Tue Jun 29, 2010 12:58 am
LOL,
I like the part when they say "(screams) An actual boy! I've never seen one before!"
LOL! Good writing my friend good writing.
 

Never trust a smiling cat.

-SwimChick01




 Re: interview with an actual boy!!!!!!
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Joined: Thu Feb 11, 2010 4:33 pm
Posts: 2349
Mon Jul 12, 2010 8:13 pm
Uhh... I'm pretty sure I'm not mistaken.... but this is from Ned's School Survival Guide!



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Joined: Wed Oct 21, 2009 7:01 pm
Posts: 35
Thu Sep 02, 2010 9:06 pm
lol



 Re: interview with an actual boy!!!!!!
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Joined: Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:41 pm
Posts: 23
Sat Jan 01, 2011 4:41 pm
I agree that is soo funny but I don't think its that funny that you have to say LOL CAUSE seriesly you dont have to say that much. I love interveiws



 Re: interview with an actual boy!!!!!!
new

Joined: Sun Jul 22, 2012 10:56 pm
Posts: 20
Tue Jul 24, 2012 1:00 pm
aumachers built the ark, profissanals built the titanic!



 Re: interview with an actual boy!!!!!!
visitor

Joined: Sun Nov 13, 2011 8:31 pm
Posts: 643
Fri Aug 24, 2012 5:56 pm
I feel so like weird since my name is Hailey :0 lol



 Re: interview with an actual boy!!!!!!
new

Joined: Wed Jul 24, 2013 1:20 pm
Posts: 269
Wed Aug 28, 2013 12:16 pm
This is so funny!!!



 Re: interview with an actual boy!!!!!!
new

Joined: Sat Sep 21, 2013 11:03 pm
Posts: 1
Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:44 am
that story was so funny please write another one . i love the first one



 Re: interview with an actual boy!!!!!!
new

Joined: Tue Apr 29, 2014 9:38 pm
Posts: 14
Thu Jun 12, 2014 4:33 pm

HILARIOUS!!!!!!




 Re: interview with an actual boy!!!!!!
new

Joined: Sat Jan 02, 2016 2:22 am
Posts: 26
Sun Jun 05, 2016 9:53 pm

this is cool. 

is that a squirrel i see?

oh no its just a pack rat.

i should probably tell someone.

or maybe i shouldnt.  

it would chew up the wires in the car.

oh well.




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