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 Jesus
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Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:10 pm

Jesus sat down, at the right hand of his Heavenly Father.

 

“Father, why is that little girl crying?” He asked

 

God looked down at his Son, his eyes filled with, sadness, but love, for the world.

 

“Because she doesn’t know me”. He answered, “That I am the thing that will fill her with the love that no one else can give her”.

 

Jesus looked at the little girl, “I will go, and tell her about your love”. He said standing up.

 

God smiled,

 

Jesus walked over to the and knelt down beside her, “God loves you”. He said

 

“How can God love me?” She asked starting to cry again, “He doesn’t know all the bad things I’ve done”.

 

Jesus reached out and touched her hand gently. The little girl jumped again. She looked at Jesus fear in her eyes, But Jesus looked back at her, with eyes so understanding, loving, and compassionate, that it seemed to overflow into her soul.

 

And she started to pour out her life to Him. Jesus listened with a sympathetic ear.

 

“God knows the bad things you’ve done, but He always forgives”. He said

 

“He knows you’re hurt from being rejected, He knows the scars, your mom’s husband left on you, and He was right there feeling that pain with you, waiting for when you could be ready, to receive His love, and comfort”.

 

The little girl sniffed, “Then why didn’t He stop these things form happening?” She asked

 

“Because, maybe, you can help other girls, or people like you”. HE said, “You can let them know that they are loved, that He feels their pain, all you have to do is ask that HE will come into your heart, and fill you with so much love”.

 

Jesus reached over and wiped her tears away gently, His hand soft and comforting.

 

“All you have to do is ask, and HE will some into your heart, and trust him with your life, and He will give you peace that surpasses understanding”.

 

The little girl managed to give him a small smile, “I’d like that”. She said

 

Jesus smiled back, “Just repeat after me”. He said

 

“Dear God, I know that I am a sinner, thank you for sending your son, to take my sins on the cross. Please forgive me for my sins, and make me clean as whiter then snow, Help to forgive my father, and mom, and myself, and to accept your forgiveness. Thank you for coming into my heart, In Jesus name amen”.

 

The little girl repeated the prayer, and looked smiling, Jesus could see the love in her eyes, He smiled back her.

 

“I feel changed”. She said, “I actually feel loved”.

 

Jesus nodded, understanding. He reached behind him and pulled out a Bible, “Here read this every day”, HE said, “It’s God’s love letter to us”.

 

She took the bible slowly, “Thank you”. She said

 

Jesus grinned, “Thank God”. HE said

 

HE helped the little girl up, and started to walk away.

 

“Wait!” She said

 

Jesus stopped and looked at her.

 

“What is your name?” She asked running to Him.

 

“Jesus”. HE answered.

 

“Jesus”, She repeated slowly.

 

HE nodded.

 

The little girl dropped to her knees, “What did I ever do for you to come to me?” She asked, just above a whisper.

 

Jesus lifted her to her feet. “Nothing, I knocked and you opened, you let me in”. HE answered, “I love you Lizzie, you are my daughter now. Now go and tell the world about me”.

 

Lizzie nodded, pressing the Bible He had given her, to her heart.

 

“I will Jesus”, She said

 

Jesus smiled, HE leaned down and kissed her forehead gently, then HE stepped back, “Time for you to go”, He said, “Your mother is waiting”.

 

For once, in her life, Lizzie didn’t get into a panic when she heard, ‘mother’

She nodded and turned to walk away.

 

Jesus watched with a smile, as Lizzie walked up to her mother smiling, Lizzie gave her mother a big hug, telling her that she loved her.

 

He turned then and walked back to His father.

 

 

 

 

                                            Story inspired by God

 

                                               

 

 

                                          I stand knocking at the gate

                    If anyone will open the door, I will come in and dwell there.

 

                                                 Revelation 3:20




 Re: Jesus
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Joined: Thu Apr 22, 2010 8:45 pm
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Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:01 pm
THAT was the best story I've EVER read! Well done!



 Re: Jesus
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Wed Aug 11, 2010 6:49 pm
This is beautiful.
 
~ Allie



 Re: Jesus
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Joined: Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:03 pm
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Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:00 pm
That was beautiful. Well done ^^

Forever and Always,
Kelsey(EverTrue)

? oh comment la tristesse consomme ?

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 Re: Jesus
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Joined: Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:01 pm
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Sat Aug 14, 2010 8:29 pm
impressive, impressive. almost makes me wonder why i gave up christianity.



 Re: Jesus
regular_contributor

Joined: Tue Nov 24, 2009 6:28 pm
Posts: 4455
Wed Aug 18, 2010 2:51 pm
This is beautiful work. Have you ever considered being a Christian fiction writer when you get older. You should.



 Re: Jesus
contributor

Joined: Sat Oct 17, 2009 3:27 pm
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Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:18 pm
WONDERFUL! It made me CRY!:")
puts in a nice simple way what "HE" wants to do for us if only we answer the door. Thank you for that little piece of our faith.
----greentea1398----



 Re: Jesus
regular_contributor

Joined: Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:25 pm
Posts: 88
Sat Sep 04, 2010 3:33 pm
thats amazing. i love it! u should write more! i love reading Christian stories like this. there so true.
 
 
Bree, Awesome and Canadian ?



 Re: Jesus
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Tue Jul 07, 2009 7:53 pm
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Sun Sep 12, 2010 12:04 am
This is absolutely beautiful. ^^ I am touched.



 Re: Jesus
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Joined: Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:11 am
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Wed Sep 29, 2010 8:20 pm
that was wonderful, truly inspirational.



 Re: Jesus
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Joined: Wed May 26, 2010 6:03 pm
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Wed Oct 20, 2010 8:47 pm
That was beautiful. Thank you for posting that.



 Re: Jesus
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Joined: Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:43 pm
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Fri Apr 29, 2011 9:28 pm
wow that was deep
I LOVE IT!!!



 Re: Jesus
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Sat Jun 09, 2012 10:41 pm
O-o that was so amazing . . . bravo!



 Re: Jesus
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Joined: Thu Jun 07, 2012 8:56 pm
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Wed Jul 11, 2012 6:02 pm
That was... I don't know how to describe it. I feel so much right now. I feel like crying, I feel like hugging someone. I feel like smiling. That was just beautiful. you MUST write more. It made me think of how much God loves me and how much Jesus does too. I feel, light. Thank you for that beautiful story. Write more, because it can change a person's life!!!



 Re: Jesus

Joined: Wed Jun 09, 2010 2:25 pm
Posts: 35
Thu Jul 26, 2012 3:58 pm
This is really awesome. I write books about God too. Definately keep going! It's a great way to use our talents for Jesus! ablankpage The Lord is my light and my salvation.



 Re: Jesus

Joined: Wed Jun 15, 2011 5:24 pm
Posts: 61
Mon Sep 24, 2012 11:41 pm
That's amazing! I love it!!!! In my church youth group we wrote modern-day parables. It was really fun. You should do that.



 Re: Jesus
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:45 am
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Thu Jan 03, 2013 7:39 am
Nice. Keep on writing for God's glory! We need Christian writers these days...



 Re: Jesus
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Fri Jan 04, 2013 9:10 pm
that was an amazing story...it had so much truth:) way to spread God's word



 Re: Jesus
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Joined: Fri Jan 04, 2013 11:28 pm
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Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:52 am
That was AWESOME! What a beautiful piece of art!



 Re: Jesus
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Sat Jan 12, 2013 11:44 pm
That was beautiful. You should write stories like these for a living. You never know where you might end up when if you continue to write such beautiful pieces.



 Re: Jesus

Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 6:59 pm
Posts: 27
Sat Mar 09, 2013 6:47 am
So beautiful! I am a Christian too. You should enter this story in a writing contest or something! I know that my redeemer lives, and that in the end he will stand on the earth. Job 19:25



 Re: Jesus
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Sun Mar 17, 2013 7:12 pm
THE MOST CONFUSING PART IS: "JESUS & GOD" ARE (1)
THOUGH, SOME PEOPLE DON'T UNDERSTAND THAT.


FROM, dreamtimepink9

P.S. I'M A CHRISTIAN.



 Re: Jesus
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Mon Jul 22, 2013 11:10 pm
This is the best story I have ever seen. You are truly a writer. "If you declare with your mouth, 'Jesus is Lord' and believe in your heart that God raised him from the dead, you will be saved." I am also a christian.



 Re: Jesus
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Sun Aug 18, 2013 3:29 am
This was beautiful!!!



 Re: Jesus
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Sun Sep 08, 2013 9:46 pm
Dear a_child_of_God, Thank you soooooo much for writing these stories. We need a lot of christian writers! Keep spreading the word! CYCLONEVAMPIRE7



 Re: Jesus
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Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2011 1:11 pm
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Fri Oct 18, 2013 11:42 pm
You are AMAZING!!!!!!!! I loved it. OMG... OMG... OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



 Re: Jesus
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Mon Dec 02, 2013 6:13 pm
I'm such a Christian and I love this story. It's so sweet and awesome and shows what GOD can do. This is sooooooooooooooo not a futile attempt.



 Re: Jesus
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Thu Apr 10, 2014 4:14 pm
LOVE IT! :) BEST STORY EVER! :)



 Re: Jesus
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Sat Jun 14, 2014 1:16 pm

Happy are they, who believe that the promise of the Lord would be fufiled. That was AMAZING! It shows the power great power of the Lord.    Keep writing.




 Re: Jesus
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Sun Jun 22, 2014 7:07 pm

That was amazing. You are truly inspiring, Please write more!!!!!!

                                                                           -M A G G I E




 Re: Jesus
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Mon Sep 08, 2014 9:43 am


WONDERFUL & INSPIRING! I never thought i'd see another Christian on Scholastic!




 Re: Jesus
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Thu Sep 11, 2014 8:01 pm

Wow, your christian too. So, am i soooo glad to have found u!!!!!!!!




 Re: Jesus
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Mon Dec 29, 2014 8:03 pm

This is the best story! I am a Christian too and I love this. My fave verse is Jerimiah 29:11. What's yours? I would love to friend you! If you want to know, I'm catchingfire1113




 Re: Jesus
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Sun Mar 29, 2015 8:37 pm

Wow




 Re: Jesus
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Mon Dec 07, 2015 3:39 am

sooo cute i adore it when i read it i was crying tears of joy i would encourage you to write more lllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeee it keep on writing you go




 Re: Jesus
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Tue Dec 29, 2015 4:23 pm

I agree, i think we should spread the wonderful word more, Everyone should be able to experience God's love. 




 Re: Jesus
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Fri Mar 25, 2016 8:11 pm

Oh My Gosh. That was so touching. It made me cry crying. I heart it! Thank you, child of God.




 Re: Jesus
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Sat Mar 26, 2016 1:24 pm

What a beautiful story! Write more! Write more! We're your biggest fans!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!heartsmileyyes




 Re: Jesus
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Mon Jun 06, 2016 5:13 am

That story was amazing, and I'm not even a Christian. I am a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints (aka Mormons). Keep writing! As one of the board members said, "This story could change someone's life." I believe that too. You have millions of fans for this story, so keep writing!

-Dragoncrown485




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