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 Life
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Joined: Tue May 03, 2016 9:09 pm
Posts: 6
Wed May 04, 2016 10:25 pm

Life is a roller coaster

Filled with up’s and down’s

 

Life is a present

You don’t know what you’re going to get

 

Life can be fun

You just have to make it that way

 

Life is a privilege

So use it wisely

 

Life is yours

So make it yours

(...)




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Joined: Sat May 21, 2016 12:13 am
Posts: 2
Sat May 21, 2016 12:37 am

I really liked this poem becuz it was so true and it had that "umph" that any poem about life and its circumstances needed. Keep up the good work <3




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