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 Lost ( sad, VERY sad )
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Joined: Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:03 pm
Posts: 32
Wed Mar 30, 2016 12:13 am

cryingLostcrying

I'm lost.

Lost by my own sadness.

The sadness of the the loss of a battle.

The ticking bomb has finally exploded.

Debris and memories has cover my eyes.

Tears have filled the gap that once was for you.

Please come back.

I'm lost by your death.

   sad For the death of my friend's family member.sad

Please show your kindness and relpy

 

 




 Re: Lost ( sad, VERY sad )
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Joined: Mon Mar 07, 2016 8:39 pm
Posts: 2
Thu Apr 21, 2016 10:34 am

Did that actually happen? It sounds sad. The poetry is good. 




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