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Joined: Thu Jun 16, 2016 5:39 pm
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Thu Jun 16, 2016 5:46 pm
Love is strong yet delicate
It can be broken
To truly love is to understand this
To be in love is to respect this
It's hard to tell your mind to stop loving someone when your heart still does.
The best and most beautiful things in the world can't be seen, nor touched, but are felt in the heart.
Love is like sunshine. It brings a golden glow to its beholder's face. And a warm feeling all over their body. It awakens souls and opens eyes. And when its over, it leaves billions of small memories called stars. To remind the world, that it still exists.
When you love someone, it's something.
When someone loves you, it's another thing.
When you love the person who loves you back, it's everything.
The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and to be loved in return.
Love is like the wind, you can see it but you can't feel it.
A love that is denied only goes stronger.
Love people, use things. Don't use people, don't love things.
Don't fall in love with someone you can live with, fall in love with the one you can't live without.
Love isn't finding the perfect person, it is finding the imperfect person and seeing how they are perfect.
If you love someone put their name in a circle not a heart because hearts can break but circles go on forever.
Love isn't being perfect, it's learning how to look past the imperfections.
Love isn't finding someone perfect; it's loving someone imperfect, perfectly.
Love is a sweet breeze that tickles your feelings when you have closely shut your heart. Love is an unexpected guest that doesn't even knock on the door and just invades your soul witout asking permission.
Faith makes all things possible. Hope makes all things work. Love makes all things beautiful.
Love is two hearts beating as one.
You know your in love when you can't stand being around that person, but when you leave you can't stand being away from them.
Love is when you don't want to go to sleep because reality is better than a dream.
Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.


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Joined: Tue Mar 15, 2011 7:07 pm
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Sun Oct 09, 2016 3:41 pm

You, miss/mister, are brilliant. That is EXACTLY how i feel abt the guy i like

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Joined: Sun Nov 20, 2016 10:34 pm
Posts: 35
Fri Jan 06, 2017 9:49 pm

I thought my boyfriend was the one. Turns out he wasn't the one.Love is blind. Your poem opened my eyes.heart

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