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 love

Joined: Thu Mar 30, 2006 3:14 pm
Posts: 5
Tue Apr 25, 2006 2:14 pm
"LOVE"
Some people say that i am blind and weak
You were the one that worked to guide me
You whispered sweet nothings in my ears and a night song me to sleep
You told me be strong you told me be brave
That was the day you passed away
but as i cry i think of you
I will be strong
because of you



 Re: love

Joined: Sun Apr 23, 2006 1:25 pm
Posts: 30
Sun Apr 30, 2006 9:21 am
i have one word to describe that
"DEEP" that was really good
keep up the good work



 Re: love

Joined: Sat Mar 11, 2006 4:01 pm
Posts: 25
Sun May 07, 2006 4:17 pm
nice keep writing ^_^



 Re: love

Joined: Fri May 19, 2006 2:50 pm
Posts: 2
Fri May 19, 2006 2:57 pm
really good



 Re: love

Joined: Thu Apr 26, 2007 3:52 pm
Posts: 7
Thu Apr 26, 2007 4:07 pm
Wow! I could never write a poem like that!!!!!! Keep on writing



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