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 Love Triangle!! Part 1 of 4
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Joined: Sat Jun 06, 2015 4:39 pm
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Thu Jun 11, 2015 3:37 am

Nova:Hey Asher, I need to ask you something.

Asher:Sure,ask me anything.

Nova;Since our 5 month anniversary is coming up, do you think we could watcha movie at your place?

Asher:Yes of course. I'll plan it with my parents right away.

Nova: Great thanks. Nova kisses Asher on the cheek and walks away.

Orton: Hey Nova.

Nova: Hey Orton.

Orton: I need to talk to you.

Nova:About what?

Orton: About us.

Nova:Orton, I..

Orton:I know you and Asher are dating and all but I really like you. No, actually Nova Petterson, I'm in love with you. And I dont care if Asher is in the middle but I will win your heart. I will win it.

Nova: Orton, please.

Orton:No. I said what I said. I love you and I will win your heart over. *Orton walks away*

*Nova sighs and keeps walking*

THE END OF PART 1




 Re: Love Triangle!! Part 1 of 4
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Joined: Sat Jul 11, 2015 6:06 am
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Sat Jul 11, 2015 6:39 am

i love this and can't wait till' the other parts!!yesheartsmiley




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Wed Nov 02, 2016 11:06 pm

Please write more!!!!!!!! winksmileycheekyyes




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