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 Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Joined: Wed Nov 21, 2007 10:51 am
Posts: 14
Wed Nov 21, 2007 5:03 pm
Hannah: You're moving!
 
Matt: Might be!
 
Hannah: So you made the soccer team and if you exept you will have to travel with the team to Brazil!?!
 
Matt: Yep!
 
Hannah: We have been dateing for half a year...and you just move!
 
Matt: I have to decide between my two loves. You and soccer!
 
Hannah: So it's me against a ball?
 
Matt: Yep!
 
Hannah: (almost in tears) I don't even think you like me the way you are saying this!
 
Matt: I have to tell my coach tonight. So I will think. Don't worry!
 
Hannah: (In tears) Go! Just go!
 
Matt: Hannah I will think, they don't need me as much...I don't have to.
 
Hannah: Please don't go.
 
~to find out what happens between the two stick around for act II~
 
 
 
 
P.S  I will only continue if you comment!
 
 



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
regular_contributor

Joined: Mon Jan 02, 2006 12:15 am
Posts: 5108
Sat Dec 22, 2007 9:05 pm
I commet
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 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Joined: Wed Jan 02, 2008 10:01 am
Posts: 29
Wed Jan 02, 2008 10:31 am
i think it is funny



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Joined: Sat Feb 23, 2008 3:22 pm
Posts: 6
Sat Feb 23, 2008 3:40 pm
Grace here, I'm an actress and i've been in 17 different plays at our local play house so i definatly say great script I would to play Hannah i can't wait 4 act 2 and maybe 3



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Wed Apr 02, 2008 1:46 pm
Posts: 1478
Fri Apr 04, 2008 12:11 am
that's good. wait is matt moving to brazil or just playing ball there?



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 3:43 pm
Posts: 2
Mon May 05, 2008 4:05 pm

i like it can you  know do the script 2 not to rush you and not bad I've been in plays for about a month or two if we had to vote between Gladys a real good writer and you i would pick you you give descriptive language and ajective pleasse write moreignore this if shows depends what picture it is

happy smiley

_andidna45_ wrote:
Hannah: You're moving!
 
Matt: Might be!
 
Hannah: So you made the soccer team and if you exept you will have to travel with the team to Brazil!?!
 
Matt: Yep!
 
Hannah: We have been dateing for half a year...and you just move!
 
Matt: I have to decide between my two loves. You and soccer!
 
Hannah: So it's me against a ball?
 
Matt: Yep!
 
Hannah: (almost in tears) I don't even think you like me the way you are saying this!
 
Matt: I have to tell my coach tonight. So I will think. Don't worry!
 
Hannah: (In tears) Go! Just go!
 
Matt: Hannah I will think, they don't need me as much...I don't have to.
 
Hannah: Please don't go.
 
~to find out what happens between the two stick around for act II~
 
 
 
 
P.S  I will only continue if you comment!
 
 






 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
regular_visitor

Joined: Mon Jan 05, 2009 8:47 pm
Posts: 185
Thu Jan 08, 2009 10:00 pm
Horrible. Sorry but its playgerism, (not sure if I spelled it right) This scene is right from Neds Declassifed when Famen had to chose between Mozely and soccer in Brazil. He was Brazil, didn't like hair, and wanted to be friends with Ned. If any policemen are reading this, do not arrest her. And you there, who posted this, come up with original ideas. Changing the name and the words won't thicken the plot.
 

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           Loraine the Great




 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:58 am
Posts: 319
Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:30 am



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:58 am
Posts: 319
Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:31 am
I really like it please post more i wanna see what happens!!!!!!!!!11



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE

Joined: Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:53 am
Posts: 14
Sat Mar 10, 2012 6:31 pm

Good job!

 




 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE
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Joined: Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:05 pm
Posts: 3
Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:56 pm

ummmmm awsome i lik it i cant wait for numba 2 and u did an awsome jobyes




 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE
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Joined: Mon Apr 02, 2012 10:55 pm
Posts: 61
Tue Apr 03, 2012 10:51 pm

Is this a true story? ITS AWSOME! wink
 




 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE

Joined: Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:11 pm
Posts: 505
Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:09 am

I like it my friend did this with me. . . do you know who I had to act out. . . Matt! Still this is good even for the guy. . .




 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE
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Joined: Thu Apr 12, 2012 4:55 pm
Posts: 5
Fri Apr 13, 2012 2:12 am

            mailoooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmggggggggggggggggggggggggg

its such an amazing play

u shold totally finish

yes




 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE
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Joined: Sat Feb 25, 2012 9:20 pm
Posts: 3
Fri May 11, 2012 11:03 pm
It's really good already,but i write plays myself and would love to see what you could do. I lovvvvveeee it!! o_0



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE
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Joined: Thu Mar 15, 2012 3:00 am
Posts: 10
Wed May 16, 2012 1:03 am
Hey i like where this story is going i am GigglyDrama6 and i am the author of Gia, Help and soon The life of a Tween Gurl :) You definatly have potential as a writer and i hope you come out with act 2 pretty soon i Love a good romance story i mean the heart wants what the heart wants



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE
new

Joined: Wed May 23, 2012 5:14 pm
Posts: 1
Thu May 24, 2012 2:12 pm
I like it but there is some few changes that I would make. One of the changes is change the beginning part to catch a readers attention. Next wait to say that Matt might be going to Brazil. I would even put how old they are and what state or even country the live in. But other than those few suggestions it was awesome



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE
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Joined: Fri Apr 13, 2012 11:54 pm
Posts: 1
Mon Jun 11, 2012 9:04 pm
UR SCRIPT WAS & WILL ALWAYS BE AWSOME MAYBE U SHOULD DO A MOVIE OHH AND PLZZZZZ ADD ME PURPLE FUSCHIA27 PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ !!!!!!!!!!!!!?!?$



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE

Joined: Wed Apr 06, 2011 3:00 pm
Posts: 5
Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:47 pm
I can't wait to see the next one plz hurry and make it



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE
new

Joined: Tue Aug 21, 2012 3:48 pm
Posts: 3
Tue Aug 21, 2012 4:34 pm
can't wait for 2 script



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE
new

Joined: Sat Feb 08, 2014 2:34 am
Posts: 15
Fri Apr 11, 2014 10:12 pm
Dude, that guy is dumb! Dumping his gf just like that?! Awesome.:)



 Re: Me or a ball! Please read this and coment. PLEASE!PLEASE
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Joined: Fri Apr 29, 2016 1:52 pm
Posts: 2
Sat Jun 04, 2016 10:51 pm

awesome




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