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 Mrs. L story #2

Joined: Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:19 pm
Posts: 452
Tue Jun 21, 2011 3:18 pm
Okay so remember this was my real teacher. (Was because now its summer) Enjoy her crazyness!


"What is 1/2 multiplied by 5/6, Lily," Mrs. L asked. "Ummmm..." Lily mumbled. "No ummmm is not the answer!" exclaimed Mrs. L then she flung a rubber band at Lily when Lily's head was turned. "Ow, what was that for?" screamed Lily. "It was for answering the question wrong," Mrs. L explained. "I know the answer," shouted Jake jumping out of his seat. Mrs. L shot a rubber band at Jake. "What was that for?" asked JAke calmly. "You called out," said Mrs. L. *hiccup* "Who just hiccuped," asked Mrs. L rather loudly. "Me," Nick mumbled. "I love hiccups go stand in the front of the room and hiccup for us!" Mrs. L squealed. "Oh okay," muttered. He walked to the front of the room and just stood there for five minutes his face turning redder and redder. "Okay I guess you can go sit down," Nick looked so relieved when he finally sat down.

 Re: Mrs. L story #2

Joined: Fri Jan 30, 2009 4:39 pm
Posts: 118
Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:09 pm
I would be that teacher lol :smileyhappy:

 Re: Mrs. L story #2

Joined: Thu Sep 01, 2011 6:04 pm
Posts: 2
Thu Sep 01, 2011 6:06 pm
:smileyvery-happy: i am 8 your story was so funny i almost cried make a nother and a nother

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