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 My embarrassing life
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Joined: Sat May 01, 2010 2:46 am
Posts: 133
Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:04 pm
note: this is all made up and no offence to people with braces. (I have to get baces soon)
Hi there.  I'm Therarna(serana) Therena(sarena).  I have railroad track bratheth and an overbite.  But good newth!  The bratheth and the overbite will be gone by tomorrow.  Wanna know why?  Becauthe I'm going to the dentitht tomorrow and I have already thuffered three yearth with my bratheth.  I can't wait!  oh and by the way the dumb "popular" girlth will have to give me there theatth tomorrow becauthe before I have bratheth and an overbite i was the motht popular girl in thcool.  But one day one of the popularth pushed me of my theat and I hit my teeth wrong on the thtool next to my then my teeth got thtrangely long and crooked.  ever thince I've been an outcatht.
well thaats my story for now ill bet back tomorrow



 Re: My embarrassing life
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Joined: Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:19 pm
Posts: 452
Sat May 21, 2011 9:00 am
That was good!  It was a little hard to understand, which is the point but some of it was really hard to understand.



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