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What will you do if you had a strong bond with a stray animal like me?
Poll runs till Tue Mar 20, 2018 1:48 am
1. tell EVERYBODY! 50%  50%  [ 1 ]
2. Do what ever it takes to adopt him/her 50%  50%  [ 1 ]
3. secretly keep it in your room and take care of it there 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Total votes : 2
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 My Friend

Joined: Fri May 08, 2015 7:17 pm
Posts: 14
Thu Dec 08, 2016 1:48 am

My friend is named Bo. But he isn't a person. He's a dog. But he isn't my dog, he lives on the street in my neighborhood. I would really love to abopt Bo but my mom would say no because we have three dogs already. So any chance I get I will say hello to him whenever he is around. The first time we met was around fall and I went outside to gt my get my back pack out of the truck. And he came walking right towards me. I didnt see a collar or ID on him so I assumed no one owned him. But he did have a black bow tied around his neck and it seemed to be choking him. So I untied the bow from his neck and he just walked away. I think that all he wanted was some help to get that bow off him. After that I decided to name him Bo. Bo isn't the only one i'm friends with. There are many stray  cats that live near my house and I love to play with them. But I have an especially strong bond with Bo. And I really hope we can adopt him someday. But for now, Bo and I will just have to keep meeting on the sidewalk.  heart

 Re: My Friend

Joined: Sun Nov 06, 2016 9:27 pm
Posts: 31
Thu Dec 29, 2016 2:58 pm

You're so sweet! I'm an animal lover too, but, unlike you, my parents don't let me have pets :(

I think you should still ask your mom about it, maybe create a persuasive letter including why you love the dog, and why you feel like you have a special connection with the dog. 

Also, did you name the dog?

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