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 My Life
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Joined: Tue Feb 07, 2012 2:46 pm
Posts: 1
Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:56 pm

Hello. My name is Jaden. wink My life started at 4: 26 pm at the (...) Methodist hospital. My life started out all wrong. My father wasn't even there to witness my birth. He was in the MILITARY!!! I was a pretty baby like I am a pretty girl now. Yet I am just fine now, I wasn't really like I turned out to be. I was really in love with life and myself and my mom. Now days, I don't even know what I'm normally doing. Im in the 6th grade at one of the best schools of the nation.  MORE LATER!!!! Please rate and read!!!! I'll share more later only if you read and rate!!!




 Re: My Life
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Joined: Tue Dec 27, 2005 9:14 pm
Posts: 1714
Fri Feb 24, 2012 1:51 am

Hi blueapple110! 

Welcome to the Write It boards! I noticed that you put this in the Journalism boards and I was wondering if it might fit better on one of the other boards... If this is really about your life, it should probably be posted on the Memoir/Post Work in Progress board. If it is about your life though, I want to remedied that you that you have to change the names of all the people and places in the piece (you'll notice I took out the name of the hospital in case it was real) to protect your identity. 

If you're making up a story, it could go on Short Fiction or Novel Post Work in Proress. 

Repost to whichever you think is best! 

Best, 

Write It Mod




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