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 My Name is Addy Scene 1

Joined: Wed Feb 08, 2012 10:49 pm
Posts: 206
Sat Feb 18, 2012 7:06 pm

                                 Characters In This Scene:

                                Addy Walker- A African-American child slave in the year 1809 

                               George Fredrickson- Addy's owner

                               Madam Claire- Maria's governess

                               Maria Fredrickson- George's only daughter

                              Heron Smith- George's good friend

                  Setting: George's Plantation

             George shaking Heron's hand: This plantation runs for miles and with my 1000 slaves, this is the best plantation ever.

               Addy *picking weeds nearby*: That's an opinion.

             George: What'd you say? Want a whipping, Saddy?

            Addy *shakes her head*: My name is Addy

            George: I have the nine-cattails ready, Maddy

            Addy: Sorry, Master Fredrickson

             George: Pardon me

            Addy *clears throat: Sorry, Master Fredrickson.

          George nods to Heron: See the respect?


           Sorry it was short. iT'S SORT OF like a prologue!

 Re: My Name is Addy Scene 1

Joined: Sat May 14, 2011 10:23 pm
Posts: 123
Sun May 20, 2012 2:20 am
Cool, I'm learning about slaves in social studies right now at school... although, I'm off for the summer in 3 days!!! :D:D

 Re: My Name is Addy Scene 1

Joined: Sun Mar 17, 2013 3:45 pm
Posts: 24
Sun Mar 17, 2013 9:16 pm
Good job

 Re: My Name is Addy Scene 1

Joined: Sun Nov 20, 2011 5:57 pm
Posts: 110
Wed Nov 20, 2013 12:08 am
but madam claire isnt in the scene....

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