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 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:57 pm
Posts: 76
Fri Sep 19, 2014 9:16 pm

I do not agree with you  Yes, I agree let Emma rest in peace, but not the truck driver in pain. Just in greif for a short time. My mother is upset by this story.




 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Sun Nov 02, 2014 8:19 pm
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Sun Nov 02, 2014 8:52 pm

I;m so sorry for your lose. It must have been a terrible moment to remember, may your poor sister rest in peace, and I hope your arm is now ok.

Driving while your drunk is a terrible thing. I hope no body does this everyday but I guess I can't do anything about this huge problem. People must be able to conrol them selves even after a cup of beer. 

I;m against drugs, smoking, and drinking wine or other alchol. Kids can convince their parents to stop if they are doing any of these so everyone must try so that doctors will no longer be needed. 

Once again i't's a terrible thing that has happened, may she rest in peace.frown




 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Tue Mar 17, 2015 10:48 pm
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Sun Mar 22, 2015 10:48 pm

So touching... you wrote a good memoir! So sad :( sadsadbroken heart




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