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 My Sister...10 years but gone

Joined: Wed Jul 27, 2011 7:47 pm
Posts: 6
Wed Jul 27, 2011 8:03 pm
My sister was 10 and I was 11.This is THAT DAY
 
 
 
My mom was going to my aunts house,so she dragged us along.Its 2 hours,and I brought 2 books and a notebook.My mom was driving at 70 mph when a semi smashed into us.Before I knew it,we were at the hospital.Mom was fine,just a headache and bruises.I broke my arm.
 
My sister  was dead.At ten.
 
Turns out the semi truck driver had drank beer right before.
 
Please never drink and drive
 
Emma
 
1999-2010 ALMOST 11
 
drunk driver smashed into car,3/14/10 other people in car minor injured
 
WE LOVE YOU EMMA! WE MISS YOU! REST IN PEACE! YOU WILL BE REMEMBERED.
 
from your now 12 year old sister,
Mackayla/KK

Message Edited by Write_It_Moderator on 08-01-2011 05:49 PM




 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
regular_contributor

Joined: Mon Mar 15, 2010 3:24 pm
Posts: 1822
Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:30 am
I'm sorry for your loss. :(
 
Still, beautiful memoir.
 
- Allie



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
visitor

Joined: Sun Aug 21, 2011 4:01 pm
Posts: 28
Mon Dec 19, 2011 12:17 pm


_cheerfulpanda15_ wrote:
My sister was 10 and I was 11.This is THAT DAY
 
 
 
My mom was going to my aunts house,so she dragged us along.Its 2 hours,and I brought 2 books and a notebook.My mom was driving at 70 mph when a semi smashed into us.Before I knew it,we were at the hospital.Mom was fine,just a headache and bruises.I broke my arm.
 
My sister  was dead.At ten.
 
Turns out the semi truck driver had drank beer right before.
 
Please never drink and drive
 
Emma
 
1999-2010 ALMOST 11
 
drunk driver smashed into car,3/14/10 other people in car minor injured
 
WE LOVE YOU EMMA! WE MISS YOU! REST IN PEACE! YOU WILL BE REMEMBERED.
 
from your now 12 year old sister,
Mackayla/KK

Message Edited by Write_It_Moderator on 08-01-2011 05:49 PM


Awww that is so sad, I'll pray for your family. I can't imagine losing my brother.

Although the truck driver must have had more than one beer because usually one beer isn't enough to make you intoxicated.



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone

Joined: Sun Nov 20, 2011 5:57 pm
Posts: 110
Wed Feb 01, 2012 9:37 pm
I would like to say this was a very touching memoir. Keep up the great work!



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
rookie_visitor

Joined: Tue May 03, 2011 9:39 pm
Posts: 7
Sat Feb 04, 2012 1:38 pm

i am so sorry.




 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
visitor

Joined: Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:39 pm
Posts: 87
Tue Feb 07, 2012 7:01 pm
You really don't know what you had till it's gone. 
US, as in the human race. We have it good, we just don't
 reliz it till it gone.
God Bless your sister, may she rest in peace.



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone

Joined: Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:10 pm
Posts: 59
Tue Feb 14, 2012 10:29 am

That's a beautiful memoir, very touching. RIP Emma.




 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Fri Mar 23, 2012 11:59 pm
Posts: 18
Fri Apr 13, 2012 10:34 pm

Aww, so sad, may your sister rest in peace. frown




 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:19 pm
Posts: 452
Tue May 01, 2012 9:41 pm
Great memoir...I'm sorry for your loss.



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Mon May 07, 2012 7:39 pm
Posts: 57
Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:32 pm
I'm so sorry for what happened, but you made it into a beautiful memoir. I suggest writing a longer piece, with more description and emotion.



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Mon May 07, 2012 8:04 pm
Posts: 41
Thu Jul 26, 2012 5:10 pm
I'm so sorry. RIP Emma :( :(



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:47 am
Posts: 1292
Sat Sep 15, 2012 2:56 am
That's so sad. :cry: Poor Emma.



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Wed Jan 11, 2012 7:54 pm
Posts: 3759
Mon Oct 15, 2012 7:35 pm
so sad :cry: :cry: :cry:



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone

Joined: Sun May 01, 2011 3:42 pm
Posts: 241
Tue Oct 16, 2012 10:59 pm
I am about to cry. This is so sad. May your sister rest in peace. I could never imagine that happening to me. You have gone through a lot to, so I will pray for both you and your family.



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone

Joined: Tue Sep 07, 2010 9:29 pm
Posts: 363
Fri Nov 02, 2012 12:31 am
:cry: So sorry!



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
new

Joined: Sun Dec 09, 2012 4:03 am
Posts: 31
Tue Dec 25, 2012 2:38 am
So touching... you wrote a good memoir!



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Sun Dec 16, 2012 11:30 pm
Posts: 11
Sun Jan 27, 2013 10:40 pm
So sweet! (I almost teared up!) You should get a notebook and write an autobiography about your sister and express how bad and wrong drinking and driving is! Make sure to publish it so I can read it!



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:52 pm
Posts: 2025
Tue Jan 29, 2013 9:43 pm
DRUNKEN PEOPLE ARE IDIOTS! FROM, dreamtimepink9



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
new

Joined: Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:40 pm
Posts: 26
Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:40 pm
What a beautiful memoir. I am so sorry about your sister.



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
new

Joined: Mon Mar 25, 2013 1:44 pm
Posts: 82
Fri Mar 29, 2013 2:33 pm
Is that true??????????????? It seems too sad to be true!!!! I'm so sorry about your sister. That was awesome!!!!



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Mon Mar 25, 2013 1:44 pm
Posts: 82
Sat Mar 30, 2013 12:44 am
I have had my dog, two aunts, my grandma, and my grandma's sister die this year. And I know that it is really hard. I'm a twin, and I can't imagine what it would be like without my sister.



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Fri Apr 05, 2013 2:35 am
Posts: 4
Sat Apr 06, 2013 4:36 pm
Im sorry about your sister. I know how it feels to loose someone to those drunk drivers because my cousin was killed on 2-9-2010! Thanks for sharing this story it was really heart-warming and moving.



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Thu Jun 06, 2013 7:00 pm
Posts: 24
Sun Aug 11, 2013 11:02 pm
I am truly deeply for your lost. God bless and may she rest in peace. :-(



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Tue Jun 25, 2013 5:52 pm
Posts: 44
Sun Sep 22, 2013 6:12 pm
I got chills when I read this. I am so sorry.

Emeraldice49




 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Fri Sep 06, 2013 10:01 pm
Posts: 61
Sun Nov 10, 2013 9:30 pm
Oh!That is so sad, so sad.That truck driver is s horrible!She shouldn't have to pay for his horrible mistake.May she live in peace, and the truck driver in pain



 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:57 pm
Posts: 76
Fri Sep 19, 2014 9:16 pm

I do not agree with you  Yes, I agree let Emma rest in peace, but not the truck driver in pain. Just in greif for a short time. My mother is upset by this story.




 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Sun Nov 02, 2014 8:19 pm
Posts: 1
Sun Nov 02, 2014 8:52 pm

I;m so sorry for your lose. It must have been a terrible moment to remember, may your poor sister rest in peace, and I hope your arm is now ok.

Driving while your drunk is a terrible thing. I hope no body does this everyday but I guess I can't do anything about this huge problem. People must be able to conrol them selves even after a cup of beer. 

I;m against drugs, smoking, and drinking wine or other alchol. Kids can convince their parents to stop if they are doing any of these so everyone must try so that doctors will no longer be needed. 

Once again i't's a terrible thing that has happened, may she rest in peace.frown




 Re: My Sister...10 years but gone
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Joined: Tue Mar 17, 2015 10:48 pm
Posts: 17
Sun Mar 22, 2015 10:48 pm

So touching... you wrote a good memoir! So sad :( sadsadbroken heart




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