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 New prologue. Please read

Joined: Tue Oct 20, 2015 7:53 pm
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Mon Oct 26, 2015 5:57 pm
The streets were vacant, he was the only soul in sight. Or so he thought. The scrawny boy slowly walked down the dark creepy streets of Manhattan. He turned his head in every which way, each time thinking he heard a rustle in the bushes, or footsteps behind him. His foot gently stepped on a flimsy twig and snapped right in half, he jumped a foot into the air. But he still went on his way. He rapped himself tighter in the soft cotton blue jacket. There was a faint howling in the wind. Almost like somebody was whistling. He heard an owl hooting in the distance, he didn't expect to hear any owls. He was terribly lost. He looked around at the unfamiliar streets, he didn't know where to go. He was cold, alone, and scared. He always heard of the rumors about Davidson street. But before this Halloween night, he only thought they were rumors.

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