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Joined: Fri Oct 11, 2013 8:45 pm
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Mon Jan 26, 2015 4:00 pm

 

I was running, and fast I have never been so scared in my whole life.  Someone was following me home.  I was coming home from school and all of a sudden, I heard a twig snap, I sprinted and ran.  I saw my house I ran all the way up to the driveway opened the door and slammed it shut then to be extra careful I locked the door twice.  I waited 15 minutes before going upstairs.  Up the stairs in my room, I sat on my bed with my laptop propped up on my two best pillows.  I shut my laptop lid and sat thinking what that was.  I had many thoughts.  It could have been a dog, or maybe even a rabbit, or a person!  I shuddered thinking about being kidnapped. I went to sleep thinking about kidnapping. I woke up to my mom saying wake up get ready for school Hailey. 




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Joined: Sat Nov 21, 2015 8:19 pm
Posts: 79
Wed Dec 16, 2015 1:05 am

Oooh, this is a nice start! Fills the reader with questions and mysteryyyy. ;) Keep writing! I wanna see what happens! :)




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