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 "NO!"
regular_contributor

Joined: Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:56 am
Posts: 4314
Fri Jan 29, 2010 11:54 pm
:D
"No!" he wailed.
"No, no, no!!!!!"
 That was one of my little brother's very first words. Although he knew "Mama" and "Dada", he never used them. It was always,"No", no matter what you said. I remember teasing him with his overused word by asking,"Are you nice?" or "Are you cute?" Never did he say the Y-word. Never. Not once.
 When family came over one day, they had realized my brother's....weird ways, and started to follow suit. They teased him, but he still said,"No" while he balled his chubby graham-cracker infested hands into firsts. Yet, they laughed, and my brother was clueless, but loving every minute of attention.
 On his birthday, my brother couldn't stand it anymore. Family was visiting, and we were pulling out the Toy Story cake. He clapped in glee, and his grubby face was covered in gunk. After singing "Happy Birthday", Mom did something amazing. He got my brother to say something other than no.
  "Honey, do you want a piece of cake?" she asked him. "No!" he shouted once again. "Okay then, no cake for you!" she replied in a sing-song voice. "Yes! Cake!" my brother exclaimed.
 We gasped. Yes! He said yes!

Haha!
Love,
Madison



 Re: "NO!"
contributor

Joined: Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:05 pm
Posts: 858
Mon Feb 01, 2010 8:44 am
Hhahahahahahaha!!!!!! That was great!



 Re: "NO!"
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:43 pm
Posts: 337
Mon May 03, 2010 5:45 pm
how sweet!



 Re: "NO!"
frequent_contributor

Joined: Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:47 am
Posts: 7216
Wed Nov 03, 2010 9:23 pm
Haha, that's adorable! <3


~Cavy

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 Re: "NO!"

Joined: Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:10 pm
Posts: 59
Tue Feb 14, 2012 10:35 am

Great, other than you've put:

 

"Then my Mom did something amazing. He got my brother to say something other than no."




 Re: "NO!"

Joined: Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:11 pm
Posts: 505
Sat Mar 24, 2012 2:56 am

Awwww. . .

            Cute!




 Re: "NO!"

Joined: Sat Jul 09, 2011 9:49 pm
Posts: 29
Tue Apr 17, 2012 12:51 pm
awww that's so cute!



 Re: "NO!"
visitor

Joined: Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:39 pm
Posts: 87
Wed May 30, 2012 10:56 pm
My sister was like that for a while. Always saying no. We called her Opposite Abby. HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!!!!!! Oh dear. That was obnoxious!



 Re: "NO!"
new

Joined: Mon May 07, 2012 8:04 pm
Posts: 41
Thu Jul 26, 2012 5:20 pm
LOL! That was cute! :)



 Re: "NO!"

Joined: Sun May 01, 2011 3:42 pm
Posts: 241
Sat Oct 20, 2012 3:32 pm
Awww so sweet!



 Re: "NO!"
new

Joined: Mon Mar 25, 2013 1:44 pm
Posts: 82
Sat Mar 30, 2013 2:52 pm
That was great, but you might want to revise it a bit more.



 Re: "NO!"
new

Joined: Wed Jul 03, 2013 5:27 pm
Posts: 48
Mon Oct 07, 2013 7:03 pm
Really good story, make sure you re read or revise, but good story



 Re: "NO!"
new

Joined: Sun Feb 02, 2014 6:52 pm
Posts: 2
Sun Feb 02, 2014 7:44 pm
It's so cute! I would try revising it a bit but keep writing! XO, ChessFairy P.S. Please friend me E( :3 P.P.S that means bunny



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