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 On Crushes

Joined: Mon Dec 05, 2011 12:40 am
Posts: 21
Sun Feb 26, 2012 5:36 am

I've never felt tis way before

It's all brand new to me

My head is spinning,I can't breathe

You're all I see.

 

I long for u to notice me

I wish you'd ask me out

So tis is wat first love is like,

And wat a crush is all about.heart

 

 




 Re: On Crushes
moderator

Joined: Tue Dec 27, 2005 9:14 pm
Posts: 1714
Thu Mar 01, 2012 1:21 am

Hi crimsoncaramel6, 

Welcome to the Write It boards!

I noticed you posted a few of your poems on the Poetry/General Discussion board. They should actually go on the Poetry/Post Work InProgress for Peer Review board. That's where readers go to look at new work and comment on it. General Discussion is for, well, just that!

If you could repost your poems the that would be great!

Best, 

Write It Mod




 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Mon Feb 20, 2012 1:57 am
Posts: 1
Thu Mar 01, 2012 2:07 am

Lheartve your poem.Its like so creative  and so great.ill rate yours 5/5 cause it is awsome.surprise 




 Re: On Crushes

Joined: Mon Dec 05, 2011 12:40 am
Posts: 21
Tue Mar 13, 2012 1:33 pm

Oh thks!!!!!smiley

And i m sry bout posting tis here hehehe well i m still quite blurblushLOL!!!!!




 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Thu Mar 15, 2012 2:30 am
Posts: 1
Thu Mar 15, 2012 3:00 am

great poet.

it really got to me. i hope it stays.

i feel the same way. cant get it out.

want to tell him. :)




 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Tue Jan 03, 2012 9:02 pm
Posts: 6
Wed Mar 21, 2012 1:23 am

OMG YOU ARE AWSOME CRIMSONCARAMEL6! I LOVED YOUR POEM!AND I UNDERSTAND IT BECAUSE I'VE HAD A CRUSH FELT DESPERATE BEFORE TOO! TKS FOR PUTTING UP THIS MESSAGE!

 

YOU ROCK kisscheekykiss




 Re: On Crushes

Joined: Tue Apr 26, 2011 2:36 pm
Posts: 18
Thu Mar 22, 2012 4:52 pm
ur poems are so cute 

heart do u mind if i use one? ^^




 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Sat Mar 31, 2012 9:55 pm
Posts: 2
Sat Mar 31, 2012 10:40 pm

I NO HOW U FEEL  I FELT THE SAME WAY




 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Fri May 04, 2012 12:56 am
Posts: 1
Fri May 04, 2012 1:55 am
Great poem!



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Sun Apr 29, 2012 12:24 pm
Posts: 2
Thu May 17, 2012 12:43 am
every body feels that way at sometimes i do i now that is exactly how i feel



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Tue Oct 27, 2009 11:03 pm
Posts: 3
Mon May 21, 2012 9:03 pm
I totally understand where ur coming from..i think everyone feels this way once or twice in there life or maybe even more but i rated 5/5 and advice: KEEP WRITING I LUV IT!



 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Thu May 17, 2012 12:46 am
Posts: 6
Wed May 30, 2012 2:08 pm
When you get around a crush, you want to act cool. When you get around a crush, you act like a fool. You want to know if they like you too. You want to know if they think you're poo.



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Wed May 16, 2012 4:09 pm
Posts: 3
Tue Jun 12, 2012 1:15 pm
Love the poem it was great hope u keep writing



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Wed Jun 13, 2012 6:39 pm
Posts: 4
Wed Jun 13, 2012 6:52 pm
Well, it is a start, but is that what you are inspired about and what you feel? That is what poems are all about. Also, please write your words right, otherwise perfect!:)



 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Thu May 03, 2012 4:54 pm
Posts: 1
Sat Jun 23, 2012 3:11 pm
Oh i do love your poem Very eccentric indeed To read this in the summer is all i really need under a large willow tree maybe i'll write my own A poem about my true crush and how i wish my love was shown



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Tue Jun 19, 2012 12:33 pm
Posts: 3
Fri Jul 06, 2012 2:50 pm
I THINK YOUR POEM IS VERY INTERESTING CRIMSON CARAMEL!!!!!!!



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Sat Jul 14, 2012 12:06 am
Posts: 1
Sat Jul 14, 2012 12:40 am
I love your poem it touched me



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Wed Aug 15, 2012 9:54 pm
Posts: 1
Fri Aug 17, 2012 8:44 pm
wow that was a great poem it is kinda how i felt and that would be cool if you gave that to your crush he would know how you felt.



 Re: On Crushes
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Mon Nov 29, 2010 12:39 pm
Posts: 971
Wed Jan 09, 2013 2:29 am
*sigh* Sweet nostalgia. *smirk* That's actually still continuing.

Anyhoo, that was really cute! I liked it. Keep writing. :D

Love,
~Tam (harrypotterisbeast because, obviously, he is), who doesn't want to access her big fat long siggy



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Wed Feb 13, 2013 8:26 pm
Posts: 1
Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:25 am
Nice poem. Try doin other forms of poetry. Can't wait to read them.



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Tue Mar 05, 2013 12:05 am
Posts: 6
Tue Mar 05, 2013 12:25 am
I love it



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Fri Mar 08, 2013 8:47 pm
Posts: 4
Wed Mar 20, 2013 1:05 am
i totally understand i have a crush but i think he likes someone else.(what should i do?)



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Sun Jan 13, 2013 4:14 pm
Posts: 31
Fri Mar 29, 2013 7:46 pm
you are a GREAT poet!! i LOVED that poem and i am not a poem person :)



 Re: On Crushes

Joined: Sat Nov 05, 2011 5:25 pm
Posts: 24
Thu Apr 04, 2013 9:57 pm
Wow that is so creative and wonderful! I guess I'm lucky because it's easy for me to talk to my crush! Good Job!:0



 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:24 am
Posts: 33
Sun Apr 21, 2013 6:42 am
Ur poem is great! I feel the EXACT same way about the new guy at my school. My distant best friend loves him too and also our enemy. But my distant friend hangs out with her. There's a rumor that my enemy and the guy like each other. Grrr...



 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Thu May 23, 2013 11:18 pm
Posts: 3
Fri May 24, 2013 12:25 am
Luv da poem! u should keep doin it cuz is works 4 u <3 <3<3<3 ;) @)



 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Mon May 06, 2013 2:24 pm
Posts: 2
Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:33 pm
i like it even though i rated it a 2. i feel the same way about a guy at my school in my class. though he did ask me out



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Fri May 17, 2013 8:05 pm
Posts: 2
Mon Jun 03, 2013 10:04 pm
That poem is so good i wish i could write like that!;]



 Re: On Crushes
new

Joined: Thu May 30, 2013 9:21 pm
Posts: 2
Mon Jun 10, 2013 9:19 pm
YOU WERE THE ONE THAT I FIRST LOVED, YOU WERE THE ONE THAT FILLED A WHOLE IN MY HEART WITH JOY,WHITH HAPPINESS I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT YOU WILL HOLD A ROOM IN MY HEART



 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Sun Jun 16, 2013 8:57 pm
Posts: 92
Mon Jun 17, 2013 6:58 pm
that is a great poem for how i feel



 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:40 am
Posts: 1
Thu Jul 25, 2013 3:58 am
I remember my first crush but it didn't end up the way I planned it to be. sad memories.



 Re: On Crushes
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Joined: Fri Aug 23, 2013 9:18 pm
Posts: 2
Fri Aug 30, 2013 8:38 pm
I love your pome



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