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 Once Upon a Time

Joined: Fri Jun 06, 2014 2:58 am
Posts: 1
Thu Sep 11, 2014 2:44 pm

Once upon a time,

Oh, those magic words

That lead to worlds unknown

And gem-filled treasure hoards


There lay brave prince and knight

In search of dragon bold

And lounge in candlelight

Listening to tales of old


Do you guys have any suggestions? Do you like it?

 Re: Once Upon a Time

Joined: Wed Jun 15, 2011 5:24 pm
Posts: 61
Fri Nov 14, 2014 11:27 pm

I love it!

 Re: Once Upon a Time

Joined: Sat Aug 09, 2014 2:32 pm
Posts: 79
Tue Feb 03, 2015 1:09 am

Very good!

 Re: Once Upon a Time

Joined: Sun Jan 04, 2015 8:26 pm
Posts: 20
Sun Apr 10, 2016 5:21 pm

Beautiful! yes

 Re: Once Upon a Time

Joined: Sat Jun 04, 2016 6:50 pm
Posts: 2
Sat Jun 04, 2016 9:51 pm

i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   it  your such a good writter  im so amazedyessmileycryingwinkenlightenedyesyesyesyesyesenlightenedenlightenedenlightenedenlightenedenlightened

 Re: Once Upon a Time

Joined: Wed Jun 08, 2016 5:38 pm
Posts: 1
Wed Jun 08, 2016 5:40 pm

I really liked this piece of writing and I think you are a very good poet. yes

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