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 Original Love Poem.... PLZ REVIEW!!!!!!!
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Joined: Sun Jan 10, 2016 1:27 am
Posts: 12
Fri May 27, 2016 1:11 am

You are here with me

And that is what I need

You... by my side

With you I need not hide!

 

You know me better

Than anyone else

You know me better

Than I know my self!!!

 

Alas the time to leave has come

And I must say goodbye.

And though I know friendship prevails 

I cling and start to cry.

 

You know me better 

Than anyone else

You know me better

Than I know myself!

 

I cannot bear to leave your side

I cannot bear to say goodbye.

Why do I have to leave right now?

Can not I stay some more?

 

I know now why 

I cannot leave

Because I love you so

So I will stay

Right by your side

Forever more

 

You know me better

Than anyone else

You know me better 

Than I know myself

 

I love you!




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