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 Perfect Wound *Song Lyrics*
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Joined: Tue Oct 06, 2009 6:52 pm
Posts: 1171
Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:37 am

Okay so a while ago I wrote a poem and I was asking for title suggestions. Laughingbird suggested it be called the "Perfect Wound" and I was like oh my gosh...that's perfect (hey I'm kinda punny! :)) Anyway so I decided to turn it into a song so here are the lyrics...trust me it's a LOT better when you have the piano music I composed along with it...too bad there was no way of posting music on here...I guess you could put the chords, but other than that...:( Music is the ONE thing I'm good at too! Anyway...I'm winding of track here..okay where was I...oh yeah here are the lyrics! Enjoy (if possible...)

 

Perfect Wound

 

I hate the way your words

Hit me like a lullaby

Like some twisted trance

Even when you say goodbye

 

I hate your crooked smile

That’s to perfect to be real

And when I hear you laugh

I hate how it makes me feel

 

I hate your stupid personality

Too kind and generous for me

Everyone loves good old you

Tricks me into what I want to do

 

Chorus:

 

‘Cause it’s the Perfect Wound

You broke my heart

Tore it apart

Yeah it’s the Perfect Wound

Made me love you

Then what did you do

Gave me the Perfect Wound

My heart still longs

To be where it belongs

With you…

 

I hate the way you smell

That irresistible scent

That makes me want you so bad

Makes me so discontent

 

I hate how you’re so perfect

There’s no flaw to be found

You’re too good to be true

Your words too profound

 

How’d you get so perfect oh so great

Good enough worthy of hate

Was it all part of your perfect plan

To steal my heart then give it back again

 

Chorus:

 

‘Cause it’s the Perfect Wound

You broke my heart

Tore it apart

Yeah it’s the Perfect Wound

Made me love you

Then what did you do

Gave me the Perfect Wound

My heart still longs

To be where it belongs

With you…

 

And most of all I hate

How you made me love you so

And then you ripped my heart out

Left me drowning in my sorrow

 

But what I hate even more

That I’ll never be able to

Let you go no matter how I try

‘Cause I will always love you

 

We were soul mates just you and me

Together forever we were meant to be

But then you had to ruin it all

‘Cause you just wanted to see me fall

 

Chorus:

 

‘Cause it’s the Perfect Wound

You broke my heart

Tore it apart

Yeah it’s the Perfect Wound

Made me love you

Then what did you do

Gave me the Perfect Wound

My heart still longs

To be where it belongs

With you…

My heart still longs

To be where it belongs

With you…

Yeah my heart belongs

With you…

And I belong

With you…

 

Yeah...I'm still working on some verses...anywho...how'd ya' like it??? Opinions PLEASE!!!

 

~treehugger17

"Don't limit your challenges...challenge your limits!"

"It's not the writer that makes the book...it's the book that makes the writer."




 Re: Perfect Wound *Song Lyrics*
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Joined: Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:05 pm
Posts: 858
Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:42 am
Ello there! Glad you like the title! That was really beautiful and somewhat reminded me of new moon... hmm.... Anyway, excellent job!



 Re: Perfect Wound *Song Lyrics*
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Joined: Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:05 pm
Posts: 858
Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:43 am
They should have used this in The New Moon movie! It would have been, like, perfect!



 Re: Perfect Wound *Song Lyrics*
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Joined: Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:48 pm
Posts: 4731
Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:58 pm
This is simply amazing!



 Re: Perfect Wound *Song Lyrics*
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Joined: Tue Oct 06, 2009 6:52 pm
Posts: 1171
Sun Feb 07, 2010 9:38 pm
Hmmm....I'm not sure if MY songs are quite movie worthy! ;)



 Re: Perfect Wound *Song Lyrics*
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Joined: Fri Aug 01, 2014 12:15 am
Posts: 48
Tue Sep 20, 2016 12:54 am

THIS IS 6 YEARS OLD!

i was looking through old posts, and i found this.

I really loved it, and thought it was really well written, so if treehugger17 is still out there, here is my thanks for letting me read such beautifully written work heart




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