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 phineas and ferb

Joined: Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:45 pm
Posts: 7
Mon Jun 27, 2011 1:46 pm
Phineas : I wonder what were gonna do today
 
Ferb :..........
 
Phineas : we go to Hawiia
 
 
Isabella : Whatcha doin
 
Phineas : goin to Hawiia
 
Phineas: Weres Perry?
Everyone: ..........
Isabella:can i come
Phineas :sure and bring the fireside girls!
 Isabella: okay fireside girls  make a airplne with cool features and make it relaxing
 
fireside girls: captain were done and we put in self sterring so no one will have to drive this airplian
 
isabella:everyone now we can get on the airplain
 
Phineas : Thank Isabella for  the airplane
 
 
candace: WHAT AIRPLAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
 
TO BE CONTINUED.........................................................................
 
 



 Re: phineas and ferb

Joined: Sat Apr 30, 2011 1:40 pm
Posts: 4
Sat Jul 02, 2011 11:42 pm
when are you gonna continue this phineas and ferb thing its sounds kinda interesting:smileyhappy:



 Re: phineas and ferb
new

Joined: Fri May 13, 2016 2:29 pm
Posts: 11
Wed Jun 15, 2016 11:21 pm

its interesting but with the spelling of an extremely young person

 




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