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 Please Read!!!!!!!!!!!! Can I.... by GhostWolf

Joined: Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:10 pm
Posts: 68
Wed Apr 20, 2016 10:58 pm

Can I.....

                             by GhostWolf1798

Can I lean by your side?

I'm so sad and lonely,

Need someone to cry on,

Tears can't stop rolling down my cheeks!!!!!!!!


Can I help you?

It look's like your struggling,

I am very strong you know,

Togetther we can lift this thing in seconds.


Can I play?

I have nothing to do,

being alone is VERY boring.

It looks like you need another player and it's me!


Can I talk to you about something?

There's good news and bad news,

Which one do you want first,

You know what, I'll start with the bad news!


Can I stop saying can I,

For all the words in the world i choose can I.

Can I stop for once,

Or I am going to say can I for the rest of my life!!!!!!!!!

 Re: Please Read!!!!!!!!!!!! Can I.... by GhostWolf

Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2015 1:21 am
Posts: 13
Sat Apr 23, 2016 12:03 am

can i use this in a book

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