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 Please Read: Poem-"A Piece in This Puzzle"

Joined: Mon Nov 23, 2015 6:29 pm
Posts: 5
Tue Nov 24, 2015 4:54 pm

          A Piece in This Puzzle

        While this world is filled with troubles,

            There is something we can do.

             We don't have to wait,

             And wish for better things to come true.

             We can help in many ways,

             More than one can count.

              To fix our problems,

               No one should be left out.

               So,come on, let's remove the Earth's muzzle,

               And let's be a piece in this puzzle. 

 Re: Please Read: Poem-"A Piece in This Puzzle"

Joined: Tue Jan 12, 2016 2:53 am
Posts: 3
Tue Jan 12, 2016 3:51 am

this was amazing! I loved every word of it. keep writing!

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