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 Please Read!!!!!!!!!!!! The Poor by GhostWolf

Joined: Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:10 pm
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Sun Mar 27, 2016 12:56 am

The Poor


How do the have so little,

But have so much?

For they hearts are made of gold,

But there clothes are made of rags.

There wisdom and thoughts live in there mind,

There hopes and dreams live in there minds,

No one will be rich like them,


For there soul is worth more than a million.

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