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 My song "Nothing"
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Joined: Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am
Posts: 17
Tue Apr 18, 2017 1:51 pm

This my first ever song Iv'e written. So if you like comment down below! Thx smiley

Some days I just can't get away on what I say

But get mad at me on saying what's true to you

Some days I feel lonely  like stainless steel

I feel like nothing to you and to you

and in my own world there is nothing.

I know it's a little short but I had fun writting it!laugh :P

 




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