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 A Harry Potter roleplay

Joined: Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am
Posts: 17
Thu May 04, 2017 5:20 pm

Ron: That's a Fred doll! You know he's dead! He fought for Harry!

George: I know mate! But I miss him! He was my twin and twins have a special bond you know.

Ron: Whatever.

Hermione: Oh, George I feel so bad!

George: Don't! I'm alright.

Harry: What are you doing here anyway?

George: Oh, well mum won't let me stay I her house because I got evicted. 

Harry: Oh.

Ron: You should've put a memory charm on the guy or people that evicted you.

Hermione: RON! Why in the name of Merlins pants would you say that!?!

Ron: Just kidding.

Bill: OK, what are you guys doing here?

Harry: A mysterious package came our way. It said Bill Weasly  so uh yeah.

Bill opens the box.

Bill reads...

Bill: Dear Bill,

       Do NOT open this box! Just keep it safe!

From, Mr.Unknown.

Harry: Hmmm?

Bill: That's mysterious.

Hermione: Sure is.

Gotta go I'll be back with more soon!


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