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Should i continue on? BE HONEST PLZ!!
Poll ended at Mon Jun 26, 2017 11:25 am
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 plz help with my new story idea: needs title, details,names

Joined: Thu May 14, 2015 1:52 pm
Posts: 20
Sat May 27, 2017 11:25 am

OK guys i really need your help on this im creating a story but it really needs work so help me plz this is just the basics

OK so this girl is part of this thing called S.O.M.F.L, which is the name of this new expiramental freezing lab, it stands for State Of Maine Freezing Lab. She volunteers to become on of the subjects of S.O.M.F.L, and leaves her family, which includes her mom, dad, younger brother, and older sister. While she is in the freezing process,smething goes wrong. She'sonly supposed to be in there for 20 minutes, but the door won't open.While she is in there, she  has dreams of what's happening in the world, and what is going to happen. When she gets out, she knows the world is going to end and how to stop it.

Thanks for reading this, i hope you can help me. Leave comments on what i should do!laughyes 

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