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 Play/Screenplay based off a rp

Joined: Tue Mar 15, 2011 7:07 pm
Posts: 57
Fri Jun 16, 2017 7:48 pm

Darkrising6 I apologize if I offend u by using ur idea.

Scene I

Open to a taxi pulling up by the main gates of a school. Exit JESS who walks to the trunk and pulls out a suitcase and a carry on. She is wearing a Loyola University sweatshirt, dark blue jeans, gray and white slip ons, and a New York baseball cap.


Thank you, sir


Any time, li'l miss!

Jess hands him some money, grabs the suitcases, and walks through the gates. 


What a kind girl! She's got something in store for her, for sure, or my name ain't Johnathon del Mariana Ingles! 


I gotta go. Bye!

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