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 Potato Man V.S Salami Guy

Joined: Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:34 am
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Thu Jan 26, 2012 11:12 pm

Potato Man                 


Salami Guy

By: sonicfan123


Chapter 1

A Battle is into Action


“You will never get me Potato Man!” Salami Guy yelled with spitballs flying in the air. “Yes I will!” Potato Man said casually.” No you won’t. You never could catch me ‘cause I’m fast and sneaky.” Salami Guy yelled again. “I can catch you it’s just that uhhh…um…I don’t feel like catching you.” Potato Man said not sure. “Then feel the wrath of my super-sonic-lasered thingy.” Salami Guy said. He took out a squirt gun that sprays salami. “Wow, you have the same gun as me except mine shoots out potatoes. I got mine from A.C.H(A.C Heroes).”Potato Man said as he took out his squirt gun. “I got mine at Wal-mart at the villain section in the toys.” Salami Guy said. 

 Re: Potato Man V.S Salami Guy

Joined: Fri May 13, 2016 2:29 pm
Posts: 11
Wed Jun 15, 2016 11:19 pm

lol so funny also friend me if u can

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