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 Prologue: The Gift (Coded)
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Joined: Sun Mar 17, 2013 3:45 pm
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Sun Apr 14, 2013 11:59 pm
A new girl named Promise Thompson is new to Thompson middle and high school. She's really smarter then the rest of the students. Many people are mean to her because she's not like the rest of them. Her specialty is also her weakness, she can reads people's thoughts. So, that's what makes her smart, but she can also hear the negative things people say. So will her gift help her or hurt her?



 Re: Prologue: The Gift (Coded)
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Joined: Sun Mar 17, 2013 5:29 pm
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Wed Apr 17, 2013 9:58 pm
Best their is. A master piece



 Re: Prologue: The Gift (Coded)
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Joined: Sun Mar 17, 2013 3:45 pm
Posts: 24
Wed Apr 17, 2013 10:18 pm
should i write more?



 Re: Prologue: The Gift (Coded)
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Joined: Wed Jul 24, 2013 1:20 pm
Posts: 269
Tue Aug 20, 2013 11:21 am
I think that's a really excellent prologue, but I'd say you should keep it like that, and then show us your first chapter!! Can't wait for the rest (please post more!)

"The world of reality has its limits; the world of imagination is boundless."
Jean-Jacques Rousseau



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