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 Re: Puppy Mill
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Joined: Sat Oct 26, 2013 8:03 am
Posts: 28
Tue Aug 12, 2014 12:46 pm

Never! They shouldn't be so cross with animals. What did animals do to them? My friend's family has a dog from such a puppy mill. He was terrible at first, and he couldn't walk. Only a few months later he became a nice polite beautiful dog.

- Passion




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Joined: Tue Aug 19, 2014 11:05 pm
Posts: 11
Wed Aug 20, 2014 8:07 pm

So right! 

And do you know about parrots? People buy them, and when they move, they leave them, they give them back to shelters and more. If you want a parrot, Treat it carefully, it can live for DECADES!

And boas! People buy young, 6in to 1ft long boas, then, when they grow up to 6ft long (or more!) giants and eat whole rats for breakfast, people abandon them, leave them on the streets, take them to shelters and things, and more! 

I LOVE pets, but I think that we should be getting LESS pets, becuase at least 1/4 of them end up being abandoned or abused! 

Puppy mills are horrible. (...)




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Joined: Fri Mar 11, 2016 12:28 am
Posts: 1
Tue Jun 07, 2016 9:38 pm

There are some good articles about this at (..), but they are pretty graphic. HOW CAN HUMAN BEINGS BE SO CRUEL?! frown




 Re: Puppy Mill
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Joined: Wed May 13, 2015 6:57 pm
Posts: 11
Tue Jul 12, 2016 7:55 pm

It's very sad to say, but people in this world are sick and evil. And I hate to say this, but there always will be. I have saved mice, birds, worms, bunnies, and any animal I can find from death. My dog was nearly sent to the mill, but we rescued him just in time. Unfortunately not everyone is like that. We all are living on this planet and we need to learn to share and look out for one another. I completely agree with you all and count me in. Nothing is going to change if no one tries to change things. If you truly believe in something, then do it. You can do anything you set your mind to. We are starting small, but we can take a stand. We just have to work together and unite as one,

Live, love, learn, dream, achieve, and believe! <3

-Lorna  (climbingmodest12)




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Joined: Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:27 am
Posts: 14
Thu Aug 04, 2016 12:48 am

 OMG THANK GOD MOST OF IT HAS ENDED, BUT STILL I THINK IT'S STILL HAPPENING! PUT AN END TO IT ALREADY!!!!!

Alicia




 Re: Puppy Mill
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Joined: Fri May 08, 2015 7:17 pm
Posts: 14
Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:43 pm

UGH! I hate puppy mills! They are cruel and evil!

I dont get that people would do this to innocent animals for money :(

HOW CAN THEY NOT FEEL BAD ABOUT THIS!!!! UGH!!!!!!! I AM GONNA MAKE A PROTEST ABOUT THIS! WHO WANTS TI DO THE SAME THING WITH ME? PLEASE?




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Joined: Fri Dec 09, 2016 8:47 pm
Posts: 3
Fri Dec 09, 2016 9:04 pm
I know it's a little late... But I am with you all the way!! Puppies didn't do anything to deserve such cruel treatment. I've also heard the mothers get put with awful fathers. They are dogs who are cruel and know how to get what they want! My friend had recently gotten a mother from a puppy mill and she had bite marks everywhere!! The puppies were fine but the mother died a few weeks later. I believe we CAN stop this from happening! Please talk to others about this and save these poor, defenseless, innocent dogs and puppies!! I want to help!! -BasketballAngel1666-



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