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Wed Jun 17, 2015 4:50 pm

The warm sun beat down on me as I held the book I was reading in one hand and a small cucumber in the other. I was in Wisconson for the summer, and it was boiling! I could hardly read the words on my page without wiping a bead of sweat off my forehead. I threw the book down on the ground and focused on my cuke. It was dark green, attracting more sun and burning up my hand. I sighed, bit off a chunk of cucumber and dragged myself inside the house. Nobody was inside, my family had all drove to the market, and I wanted to stay behind. It felt wierd being in there by myself. I took a napkin of the table and mopped my brow. I lumbered up the steps into the room into the room I was sharing with my cousin, Jessica....




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