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 Re: read this and tell me what you think
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Joined: Fri Aug 16, 2013 7:17 pm
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Sun Aug 18, 2013 11:45 pm
Very good!!!! I loved your writing. That is really UNFAIR now that you pointed that out. My friends and I have a newspaper we made up. Our school doesn't have a newspaper, so we made our own. You were very persuasive. Good job. ~decipheringautumn13 PS friend me??? anyone??? and do any of you do gymnastics???



 Re: read this and tell me what you think
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Joined: Wed Jul 03, 2013 5:27 pm
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Wed Apr 23, 2014 8:27 pm
Really good!



 Re: read this and tell me what you think
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Joined: Sat Feb 02, 2013 8:56 pm
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Fri Jun 27, 2014 10:54 pm

Finally! I love this! Great argument!




 so true!
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Joined: Wed Jul 09, 2014 12:28 am
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Tue Aug 05, 2014 7:19 pm

I totally believe that a woman will one day become president and that they will be awesome!yes




 Re: read this and tell me what you think
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Joined: Sat Oct 26, 2013 8:03 am
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Tue Aug 12, 2014 12:50 pm

Nice entry! I LOVED it!

- Passion




 Re: read this and tell me what you think
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Joined: Sat Feb 02, 2013 8:56 pm
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Sun Oct 12, 2014 12:22 am

Yes! Thank you finally!

I mean,we're not toys! We have good ideas!!! 

These are great points!

This whole guys are manly and such (no offense guys (;) is whacked.

I mean,we are just as equal as they are! I have a freind whose a GIRL who once dented a bus! I have a freind whose a GIRL who wants to be a scientist!

Yeesh! Get it through your head ppl!

Not you ppls. The invis ppl that Im talking to!




 Re: read this and tell me what you think
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Joined: Fri May 01, 2015 7:51 pm
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Thu May 28, 2015 7:59 pm

That is so beautiful!!!!!!




 Re: read this and tell me what you think
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Joined: Sat Jan 02, 2016 2:22 am
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Sun Jan 03, 2016 5:57 pm

i love this essay, but it was so sad where they were force fed though. and its also true that boys are better treated than girls. sometimes. who has at least one class where the girls are all almost perfectly good and then all of a sudden a boy that sits in the back of the class has to ruin it? i hate it when that happens. the 1 one thing that girls in my class get in trouble for is chatting. especially me cus i like to talk but who doesnt?but the boys in my class they get to ruin stuff like going to the kindergardeners play for everyone because they were throwing a footbal around during math. how awful.




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