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 s the start of my book
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Joined: Sun Apr 02, 2006 7:49 pm
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Thu Dec 21, 2006 7:02 pm
this is the first part of my mystry tell me if you like it .
 
 
 
        one day anna went into the forest and she was never heard from agine



 Re: s the start of my book
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Joined: Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:02 pm
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Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:07 pm
it is good. my opinion if you want to beef it up is explain anna more, explain more and use more interesting describing words



 Re: s the start of my book
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Joined: Fri Apr 26, 2013 10:58 pm
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Tue Feb 11, 2014 9:11 pm
Ok.... There's not much I can say to that...



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