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 See Me

Joined: Sat Sep 22, 2012 12:29 am
Posts: 41
Fri Jan 01, 2016 5:14 pm

Look at me.

What do you see?

You see someone shy.


don't you care?

You need to tear

away flesh and bone

to see the unknown.

Look into my eyes and see

my soul set free.

 Re: See Me

Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2015 1:21 am
Posts: 13
Sun Mar 20, 2016 11:22 pm

Hey Could I use this in one of my books

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