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 Shards O'Glass

Joined: Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:06 pm
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Thu Feb 03, 2011 3:45 pm
Some of you may not have heard of these treats for adults. Shards O'Glass are frozen ice pop with glass shards inside. Are glass shards safe to eat? Never! Kids should never eat one, neither should adults or teens. They contain nicotine, an addictive substance that can kill you. These pops are so dangerous they were recalled. The ingrediants are:
  • Ammonium Hydroxide
  • Benzaldehyde
  • Cellulose
  • Delta Decalactone
  • Gamma Decalaactone
  • Ethyle Acetate
  • Guare Gum
  • Isoamyl Butyrate
  • Para-Methoxybenzaldehyde
  • 2,3,5,6-Tetramethylpyrazine
  • Vanilla bean extract

Shards O'Glass have health risks. They are:

  • Internal Organ deterioration and/or failure
  • Gum Cancer
  • other oral maladies
  • The worst of all~death

If you had a loved one use shards o'glass in the past, tell them to never take a risk like that again. They have recalled the popsicles, but the spheres are still being used. If you know a loved one still using them, tell them the risks if taking them. Educate your friends about the risks of shards o'glass.

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