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 SHORT AND SIMPLE> READ IT CUZ I KNOW YOUR BORED!
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Joined: Fri Aug 01, 2014 12:15 am
Posts: 48
Sun Jul 24, 2016 10:38 pm

A simple poem i wrote thats true and ravishing. 

 

 

 

Sitting right here
like every raindrop 
watching each tear 
wetting each lash 
roll down 
tumbling with a splash 
and dissolve into the mesh
of my worn shirt
underneath the tatters
fresh wounds that hurt 
darkness and closed shatters
many scars in vain 
the deeper they go 
my heart in pain 
no where to go 
nobody to care 
I’m left 
sitting right here
 



 Re: SHORT AND SIMPLE> READ IT CUZ I KNOW YOUR BORED!
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Joined: Thu Jul 04, 2013 4:31 am
Posts: 422
Sun Jan 29, 2017 6:41 am

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