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 Sister not like sister Bella and Macy

Joined: Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:45 pm
Posts: 7
Tue Jun 21, 2011 2:32 pm
Bella : wake up time to go to the mall its 12:44pm and your still asleep or I will  just leave you hear
without the cute shoes yah wanted.
Macy: [snoring] wait did you say shoes cute ....SHOES..
Bella : yahh the really cute shoes and if you get ready in 5 minutes its all on me
Macy: Okay ....5 seconds later Im ready
Bella :[just got done shopping] Macy thanks alot know Im broke when I said a cute pear of shoes I meant one pear of cute shoes not 20 pears of cutes shoes you remind me of london on suite life on deck
Macy: Am not OOw sparkles
Bella: If I had one day to replace my sister I would

Message Edited by _icecreambold1_ on 06-27-2011 12:56 PM

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