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Joined: Mon Apr 11, 2016 5:50 pm
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Thu May 12, 2016 4:49 pm
Color bursts
Sunlight beams
Blinding me
I love it
I inhale
Glowing and warm
Heat dancing with the flowers
The grass is laughing with the sun
Laying down
The clouds are like a young artist
Trying but never perfect
They dance for me too
The grass tickles
I laugh with them
The sun smiles like an old friend
Happy to see me 
I sit up
A breeze picks up my hair
The butterflies leave the flowers
Hopping on to the next 
I smile
A flying speck of color flies near
Looking like a piece of rainbow
It lands on a flower and then another
Rustling sound
A cat, black as midnight
lurks in the bushes nearby
Finding nothing but leaves greener than grass

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