Post Work in Progress for Peer Review


Welcome to Write It, the home for young writers. Post your works-in-progress and get feedback or give your opinion on your peers’ creative writing. Try a step-by-step writing workshop, then publish your writing online.

You’ve probably noticed we’ve made some changes to the boards! Find the boards for Underground Railroad historical fiction, Science Explorations, Scholastic News, and more right here.

Looking for our boards dedicated to favorite series, authors, and causes? You'll find them on THE STACKS. Head on over for the Buzz Board, Harry Potter, Save the Planet, Goosebumps, and more!
   [ 26 posts ] Average score:  
Author Message
 starting a book

Joined: Thu Aug 28, 2014 2:45 pm
Posts: 1
Thu Aug 28, 2014 3:19 pm

 i'm new here, i was thinking about starting a book. Does anyone want to be a character? if you do then answer the questions bellow:


  1.    age in the book:
  2.   name in the book:
  3.   personalty:
  4.   place your from in the book:

                                                           i need at least eight people.

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Thu May 22, 2014 12:15 am
Posts: 356
Fri Aug 29, 2014 10:58 pm
  1.    age in the book: 13
  2.   name in the book: Fiona
  3.   personalty:highly intelligiant,but funny,and out-going
  4.   place your from in the book:anywhere that u want me from is ok,u can choose                                              

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Tue May 13, 2014 11:08 am
Posts: 16
Mon Sep 01, 2014 6:36 pm

Midnightwave70 this is a great idea to get characters! I might have to borrow it sometime. ;) I made up a character that I like to use in some of my stories, and  you can change her name or age or anything, it's just a base.


I usually imagine her medium height  with freckles, wavy blond hair, and bright sky blue eyes. Good luck writing your story! :)


1. 13 years old

2. Keiley

3. Energetic, kind, smart, FUNNY, has a mysterious side

4. Florida

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Tue Jun 24, 2014 1:13 am
Posts: 21
Wed Sep 03, 2014 3:25 am

Age: 14

Name: Wulf Park

If more adventure type novel: quiet, sensitive type of guy

if more like a novel about high school: the bully(antagonist)

If other, you can choose

wherever. Minnesota

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Sun Feb 09, 2014 7:57 pm
Posts: 57
Sun Sep 28, 2014 10:41 pm

1. age in the book: 11

2. name in the book:  Nikki

3. personality: outgoing, funny, fashionable

4. place your from in this book: New York! Yeah Baby!




 Re: starting a book

Joined: Wed Sep 24, 2014 10:33 pm
Posts: 8
Wed Oct 01, 2014 1:12 am

age: 13 or 14

Name: Shadow

personality: dark, scary, yet loyal to her friends.

place im from: Alaska

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Sat Feb 02, 2013 8:56 pm
Posts: 290
Tue Dec 16, 2014 12:16 am



3. Mean,a bit confusing/complex,loyal,attitude-y


 Re: starting a book

Joined: Tue Jun 24, 2014 1:13 am
Posts: 21
Wed Dec 31, 2014 1:19 am

1. 16

2.  Liam Downing

3. laidback, shy, timid, quiet, good at lock picking, can never make eye contact

4.anywhere that drives the story

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Sun Feb 15, 2015 8:45 pm
Posts: 21
Sun Feb 15, 2015 8:57 pm

1. 16

2. Jeannette

3. Is very creative, artistic and fashionable.

4. Paris



 Re: starting a book

Joined: Fri May 29, 2015 12:36 am
Posts: 10
Fri May 29, 2015 10:51 pm

Age in Book: 13

Name in Book: Ever

Traits: Quiet, shy, very bookish but also very loyal

Where She is From: Wyoming 


If the name is too obscure you can change it! Good luck with your book!



 Re: starting a book

Joined: Sat Jan 09, 2016 1:41 pm
Posts: 3
Sat Jan 09, 2016 1:42 pm

1. 24

2. Annabelle (Called Anna or Belle)

3. Joyous, cute, energetic, intelligent, lovable

4. Takes place in Tampa, Flordia or Los Angeles, California

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Mon Jan 04, 2016 4:50 pm
Posts: 9
Tue Jan 19, 2016 4:08 pm

Age: 12

Name: Corin

Personality: Popular, nice, super -smart but doesn't know it, bubbly

She is from: London!

I imagine her with brown hair, hazel eyes, and glasses.

This is a super-cool idea, midnightwave70!

Peace, love and books from angelbeliever89!


 Re: starting a book

Joined: Sun Feb 15, 2015 8:45 pm
Posts: 21
Thu Mar 03, 2016 1:04 am

Age: 13

Name: Cassandra

Personality: Smart and sassy 

Home: Alabama

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:17 pm
Posts: 7675
Thu Apr 07, 2016 1:30 am
  1. age in the book: 22
  2.   name in the book: Amelia Adams
  3.   personalty: Smart, brave, kind, dealing with lack of self-confidence, somewhat literal. loyal, trusting, good friend, and a bit of a perfectionist.
  4.   place your from in the book: Georgia
  5. age in the book: 20
  6.   name in the book: Vance Kanell
  7.   personalty: Like Amelia, he is a bit of a perfectionist, and doesn't want to be wrong, but is overall interested in baseball, basketball, inventing, smart, brave, a good friend, trusting  and loyal.
  8.   place your from in the book: Georgia

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Fri Apr 08, 2016 7:23 pm
Posts: 14
Sat Apr 09, 2016 5:27 pm


  1. age in the book: 17
  2.   name in the book: Sydney Cross
  3.   personalty: Smart, determined, witty, sarcastic, loyal
  4.   place your from in the book: New York. 


 Re: starting a book

Joined: Wed May 11, 2016 8:01 pm
Posts: 269
Fri May 20, 2016 3:25 pm

age 13 in the book

Name is Ruby Emberflame

Some days, has a happy, hyper personality, other days, has a quiet, non social personality.

Place: a small town called Paulden, Arizona.

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Thu May 14, 2015 1:52 pm
Posts: 19
Thu Jun 16, 2016 2:56 pm

1. 12


2.Carter Mills (girl)


3. smart, careful, funny, Mexican, logic, nerdy, quiet, and mostly happy


4. Mexico, came to whatever the setting is in the story when she was four, parents died when she was six, now an orphan

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Thu May 12, 2016 3:17 pm
Posts: 2
Thu Jun 23, 2016 7:11 pm

1. 17

2. Opal Ray(middle name) McCann

3. rebellious, street smart, loves reading

4. Queens

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Tue May 17, 2016 8:14 pm
Posts: 11
Fri Jul 01, 2016 12:58 am

age 13

name ether kazuto kirigaya(nickname kirito) or asuna yuki

kind,brave,cares for other,smart shy quiet


 Re: starting a book

Joined: Sun Feb 15, 2015 8:45 pm
Posts: 21
Fri Jul 01, 2016 4:48 am

Age: 12

Name: Indigo

Personality: Sassy, laid back, casual

Where she's from: Seattle 

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Mon Jun 13, 2016 4:29 am
Posts: 1
Tue Jul 12, 2016 12:27 am

1. 12

2. Rose

3. THe popular mean girl who is secretly smart and sweet

4. New Zealand (an island in Australia)

BTW this has nothng to do with my life I just thought of something:)


 Re: starting a book

Joined: Mon Aug 08, 2016 9:47 pm
Posts: 3
Wed Aug 10, 2016 4:19 pm

Age: 10

Name: Brianne

Personality: Creative and crazy

Location: British Columbia, Canada

Hope this helps your book,


 Re: starting a book

Joined: Tue Sep 13, 2016 8:18 pm
Posts: 1
Sat Oct 22, 2016 1:17 pm

Hello and good luck on your book do your best.smiley

 Re: starting a book

Joined: Fri Nov 04, 2016 12:17 pm
Posts: 32
Sun Nov 06, 2016 2:37 pm

Age: 12

Name: Chloe Sanchez

Personality: Mainly quiet, but not in a shy way. More in a living inside one's mind way. Nice and caring, but mostly keeps to oneself. 

Where She's From: Florida. 

 I want to write a book!

Joined: Mon Nov 07, 2016 1:36 pm
Posts: 4
Mon Nov 07, 2016 1:46 pm

What should my book be called?  


Anyone want to be in it?  If so just post!  I will be on all week!

 Is it going to be fanacy or real?   




 Re: starting a book

Joined: Thu Feb 23, 2017 12:23 am
Posts: 18
Sat Feb 25, 2017 8:20 pm

1. age in book: 14

2. name in book: Luna Brookswolf

3. personality: dark, mysterious, strangley able to be able to do everything needed to be a theif; spy; etc.; sews; plays guitar.

4. place she's from in book: North Dakota

description: straight black hair, emrald green eyes, wears black long sleeved shirt and jeans with patches, has a necklace with a black, smooth stone pendent with a strange engraving on it 

Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
   [ 26 posts ] Average score:  

PRS © 2008 PRS Team