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 Stef the bird girl
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Joined: Tue Jul 19, 2016 3:53 pm
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Wed Jul 20, 2016 2:42 am

         Chapter 1 Stef saves felsite

Once a pone a time there was a teenage girl that no won likes because she could tern into a bird and that’s ware the story begins

Stef you know there is a now move in theater? You wont to go with me it will be fun? Sade felsite. No. come on Stef. I Sade no and that is that ok. Ok Stef. Good.

I’m going home ok felsite. Ok bye see you tomorrow.

Meanwhile... I’m in my room board I am I don’t like that board I am. Ugg I’m taking to my self . MOM! I’m going on a flight ok. OK Stef. Bye mom see you later. Is that felsite getting kidnapped? Oh no. FELSITE! I’m coming hold on! OK. BAMM! Stef SWOPS DAWN AND PUNCHES THE GUS IN THE FASE AND SAVES FELSITE! You ok felsite. Yay. Good. About that move you wont to go felsite. YA! OFF COURS. Ok let’s go. that move was good. Did you like it Stef? yay you. Yay were you born with the bird thing? Yay. Cool I wish I was. It’s fun and hard to learn to fly.




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