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 Story Idea!! Please read
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Joined: Thu Jan 03, 2008 9:18 pm
Posts: 216
Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:14 pm
I have an idea. It's about a bad mannered angel sent to earth to learn a lesson. He get's gets housed by a young girl who hides him from her parents. He learns his lesson and gets sent back to heaven.

Writer-2-B  what do u think?



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contributor

Joined: Sun Dec 02, 2007 5:59 pm
Posts: 2418
Sat Jan 12, 2008 2:10 pm
good



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contributor

Joined: Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:02 pm
Posts: 958
Sun Jan 20, 2008 11:58 am
Hmmm... I don't know. It's an interesting idea?
 
Question mark as in I'm not sure.
 
See you later,
magic*esi



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regular_visitor

Joined: Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:30 pm
Posts: 189
Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:42 pm
Hey, that sounds pretty cool -- but I have a suggestion for the ending; unstead of going back to heaven he's given the job of making that part of the
world better. Just a suggestion! By the way, it reminded me of a story idea that I had, and I'll try and post it soon. Look for me!
                                                                   Miss X
*I thought you lived in a school*



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frequent_vsitor

Joined: Tue Apr 29, 2008 2:41 pm
Posts: 299
Mon May 26, 2008 3:05 pm
this idea is much better than the beauty paegent one. i like it a lot.



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new

Joined: Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:52 pm
Posts: 2025
Tue Jan 29, 2013 5:47 am
ANGELS ARE PERFECT. BECAUSE GOD MADE THEM. FROM, dreamtimepink9



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new

Joined: Wed Jan 11, 2012 7:54 pm
Posts: 3759
Fri Feb 08, 2013 1:38 am
I like angels,but there's this really annoying kid that I know named that....yeah :P and I don't go to church and stuff :|



 Re: Story Idea!! Please read

Joined: Sun Nov 20, 2011 5:57 pm
Posts: 110
Fri Aug 23, 2013 10:19 pm
omg...i think u copied the ideea from this show. any chance u watched this show aiknak wala jin. its not english but the idea is the exact sam. The show is in urdu.



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