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 Supernatural- a story: part 1

Joined: Fri Sep 20, 2013 12:55 am
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Sat Jan 11, 2014 7:23 pm
Hi this is a story I made based on a dream. Hope you like it! this is chapter 1 Ch. 1 I sat down to eat lunch. I looked around and saw Noah with his jock friends, Sara getting big laughs from her friends, and... MILO STARING IN MY FACE!! "Milo! What do you think you're doing?!?!" "I flooded our classroom." he admitted. "Again?!?!" Wait. Hold it. You think Milo is a delinquent, right?! well, he's not. He had a right to flood our room. It's for little kids; painted with flowers and ponies. Me, Milo, Noah, and Sara, we don't have disabilities. We have supernatural powers. And we have to save the world. Just then, the PA announced, "Grace, Noah, Milo, and Sara, please come to the front office IMMEDIATLY!!!" I groaned. We were going to get in trouble because of Milo. I pointed to Noah and Sara and Milo nodded. Uh oh. Chapter 2 will be posted shortly! Thanks! :)

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