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 Terrible song I wrote 2 years ago, it's hilariously pathetic
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Joined: Fri Nov 04, 2016 12:17 pm
Posts: 32
Mon Dec 05, 2016 12:31 am

When I found you

I was like this too

Washed up on shore

Couldn't take it anymore

Done with life

Life hurt us with a knife

Wanted to hide

Wanted to find

The love of you life

Hopin', Dreamin'

For somethin' big

Needed a miracle

Needed an answer

hopin', reachin'

Groping at nothing

Wanted the power

Sent cuts into skin

Life went paper thin

Sent daggers to the heart

You know you played a part

Hurt people so bad

Just because you were mad

When I left you

I was like you too

 

 

HAHAHAHAHA! THAT IS SO PATHETIC!!! WHAT WAS I THINKING!?

Ok, see y'all later!




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