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 The Bind. Prologue.

Joined: Fri Mar 21, 2014 10:23 pm
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Fri Mar 18, 2016 12:58 am

The cold intense warmth of the sun beamed down on the people of Chink. Where everyone had nothing but everything. Where Charlotte would stay. This is the richest people you could find, and it is not peaceful. They used to say the Queen and the King were the richest, but to Charlotte if that were still true she wouldn't be in hiding. "She's only a baby, she must leave." Somone's speaking, why? What's going on? "No, she will grow up with me! I'm her only savior!" The voice who spoke before replied intensely. "Give the child to me! Or she will suffer!"

  A scream a painful sad scream that ripped through Charlotte like a shot. 

   But is was not hers. 

   It was someone else. The first one. The female! "Arghhh! Why Aaron?" She heard footsteps but nothing else. 

 War had broken through Chink and Garsenx. But who in the 3 Earthly worlds had broken the bind between love, prosperity, and hate?  

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