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 The Climb Parody

Joined: Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:20 pm
Posts: 5477
Tue Nov 02, 2010 1:55 pm
We're out of T.P,
And I really gotta pee.
But I'm too lazy to go to the store,
I'll never reach it.
So I am dancin'
And I am prancing,
But I still have to pee and
There are no napkins
But I gotta keep trying
Gotta stop eating saltines.
There's always gonna be another faucet
That won't stop dripping, and...
It's always gonna remind me something....
It's really embarrassing
Ain't about how I get the T.P.
Just about that I get it soon....
The bathroom tissue....
The things I'm doin'
Just to keep goin and,
I'm drinkin' water galore and,
I cannot take it,
I am showin' it,
By holding myself and,
Nobody is here to see me and...
Just gotta keep going
And I, I gotta reach the phone,
I gotta tell that guy to keep goin'
I can't go 'till I have that paper,
That super strong toilet paper.
I really like to get ultra strong,
So I don't use as much......
I really need it right now, yeah.
Don't think I can hold it no more, yeah.
Gotta get a mop!
There's always gonna be another moment,
That I'm in toilet crisis.
Always gonna be a time where I can't hold it,
And my guy isn't there to support me.
I might as well just sit down and think,
'Bout cupcakes and roses, yeah.
It's not helping!!!
Keep on moving, you'll get here,
But stop at the store, baby
It's all about, gettin' here fast
So I don't explode... Yeah, yeah, yeah.

 Re: The Climb Parody

Joined: Tue Dec 15, 2009 5:22 pm
Posts: 3690
Wed Nov 17, 2010 9:19 pm
  LOL, awesome! :smileytongue:
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 Re: The Climb Parody

Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2010 4:16 pm
Posts: 12
Tue Dec 21, 2010 10:49 pm
is this poem about having to pee??? omg wierd!!!! i liek it though

 Re: The Climb Parody

Joined: Tue Mar 02, 2010 6:45 pm
Posts: 277
Thu Jan 20, 2011 5:03 pm
No comment. :robotindifferent:

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 Re: The Climb Parody

Joined: Thu Apr 22, 2010 8:45 pm
Posts: 181
Sat Feb 19, 2011 1:40 pm
wowwww! lol! no comment

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Joined: Thu Apr 09, 2009 4:15 pm
Posts: 77
Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:19 pm

 Re: The Climb Parody

Joined: Mon Jul 04, 2011 5:02 pm
Posts: 90
Thu Jul 07, 2011 4:48 pm
i love it so funny!!!!! i have a song parody that's not up here but it's kinda of like it. It's of the song Solo by Iyaz. I love your version. Friend me!!!!!!!

 Re: The Climb Parody

Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2011 6:08 pm
Posts: 165
Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:00 pm
Luv it :P i just LOLed and i think my parents think i'm psycho :P

 Re: The Climb Parody

Joined: Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:02 pm
Posts: 6
Thu Aug 16, 2012 7:31 pm
wow. can't really comment. it was a nice song...

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